Pitch: Final Presentation

This is our final pitch where Hannah and I presented to our audience of how the title sequences we chose inspired us and we also addressed the changes we made after the feedback we were given in our first pitch.  

The changes we addressed was the budget change to which we increased and we also changed the male actor for our sequence from Jason O'Mara to a more well known actor- Danny Dyer. Furthermore, we chose Danny Dyer as he has worked with our director, Nick Love many times before so it made more sense to cast him as the lead. 

Pitch: Feedback

After giving our pitch to the class, Hannah and I received feedback of what went well, what needed developing and what was wrong.  From this, we have improved our pitch and added information we missed out. We changed the actor of our main lead from Jason O'Mara to Danny Dyer. Our feedback sheets questioned our budget and suggested we raise it to suit the director and genre. In our pitch, we included what we expect our title sequence to look like and added Todorov's theory to explain our narrative.

Pitch: Presentation

This is our pitch for our crime mystery film , we recieved feedback from our class and will amend the issues risen.