Feedback: Title Sequence First Draft

After presenting our title sequence to our audience who also gave us feedback. Our audience did not understand our female character was a policewoman which we failed to convey in our sequence. In order to resolve this situation Hannah and I will include footage of the female character in a police uniform. Overall, the feedback we received was positive.  

Pitch: Feedback

After giving our pitch to the class, Hannah and I received feedback of what went well, what needed developing and what was wrong.  From this, we have improved our pitch and added information we missed out. We changed the actor of our main lead from Jason O'Mara to Danny Dyer. Our feedback sheets questioned our budget and suggested we raise it to suit the director and genre. In our pitch, we included what we expect our title sequence to look like and added Todorov's theory to explain our narrative.

Audience Research: Title Sequence Feedback

We gave out the questionnaires to those who fit in our 18-40 target audience of men and this enabled us to establish our idea further. Hannah and I found out the majority of our target audience liked our idea and casting choices and thought the idea of the title sequence was interesting. This gave us clarity in the narrative of our plot as we now know our title sequence appeals to our desired audience. 

Audience Research: Feedback

From our research, Hannah and I established our audience liked to watch films as a way to escape from ordinary life, a range of them watch films weekly and also enjoy watching British films. This information will help Hannah and I gain a clearer idea as to what our title sequence needs to contain in order to reach out to our audience. In addition, we found out the majority of our audience enjoy crime films which tells us our genre fits the audience very well. 

This questionnaire will help Hannah and I develop our title sequence.