For our second draft we added more footage showing Hannah's character as a policewoman and we also shot scenes of an image of the policewoman being burned. This was to show the audience the villain holds a strong dislike for the woman.
For the ending of the sequence, inspired by the Zodiac title sequence, I added a series of fast cuts taken from the GoPro footage. This was because our feedback suggested we needed some sort of climax as the sequence built up to nothing. I also added the sounds of knife to further create excitement for the audience however both Hannah and I did not like the outcome of this as we decided the knife sound was not relevant to our sequence and it did not create the affect we wanted.
I also added in scenes of small spaces to further build the suspense and tension for our audience, Hannah and I wanted to further establish the plot of our sequence which is why we decided to include footage of acid bottles. This was also to extend the length of our sequence in order for us to reach the time limit.
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