Saturday 31 January 2015

Pitch: Feedback


After giving our pitch to the class, Hannah and I received feedback of what went well, what needed developing and what was wrong.  From this, we have improved our pitch and added information we missed out. We changed the actor of our main lead from Jason O'Mara to Danny Dyer. Our feedback sheets questioned our budget and suggested we raise it to suit the director and genre. In our pitch, we included what we expect our title sequence to look like and added Todorov's theory to explain our narrative.

















Sunday 25 January 2015

Pitch: Presentation

This is our pitch for our crime mystery film , we recieved feedback from our class and will amend the issues risen.

Thursday 22 January 2015

Character Profiles

Hannah and I have applied Propp's theory on our two main characters.

  • Protagonist- Works to defeat the antagonist
  • Antagonist - Goes against the hero
  • Donor- Gives the hero something to help aid them on their journey
  • Helper- Helps the hero
  • Dansel in Distress- Often the 'prize' for the hero, seeks the hero for help.
  • Dispatcher - Character who identifies the issue and calls for the hero's help.
  • False Hero- Attempts to take credit for what the hero has done and/or attempts to marry the dansel in distress.


Character Profiles 


Basic Statistics:

Name: Catherine Moore
Gender: Female
Relationship status: Engaged
Age: 29
Nationality: British
Current Residence: London
Occupation: Police Sargeant
Income: Estimated 40,000

Talent/Skills: Intuative, Perceptive
Physical Characteristics:
Height: 5,7
Weight: 10 stone
Race: Cacuasian
Eye Colour: Blue
Hair Colour: Brown
Distinguishing Features: Freckles, moles
How does he/she dress: Ladylike, classy
Character Involvement in Story:
Relationship with other characters:
  • Robert Johnson- Johnson is assigned Catherine Moore as his partner in the police force after the death of his former partner. They do not get along as Johnson remains hostile towards her and does not work with her well much to Moore's disdain.

Basic Statistics:

Name: Robert Johnson
Gender: Male
Relationship status: Single
Age: 32
Nationality: British
Current Residence: London
Occupation: Police Sargeant
Income: Estimated 40,000

Physical Characteristics:
Height: 6,2
Weight: 11 stone
Race: Cacuasian
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Brown
Distinguishing Features: freckles
How does he/she dress: Smart, concealed,
Character Involvement in Story:
Relationship with other characters:
  • Catherine Moore- Johnson is assigned Moore as his partner much to his disdain as he hoped for a male partner to help him with his cases. He shows this dislike to her as he does not take her seriously in the profession due to her young age and due to the fact she is a woman  in a seemingly 'male profession'.


Audience Research: Title Sequence Feedback


We gave out the questionnaires to those who fit in our 18-40 target audience of men and this enabled us to establish our idea further. Hannah and I found out the majority of our target audience liked our idea and casting choices and thought the idea of the title sequence was interesting. This gave us clarity in the narrative of our plot as we now know our title sequence appeals to our desired audience. 










Audience Research: Title Sequence


As part of our audience research Hannah and I conducted another questionnaire revolving around our title sequence. We asked our target audience of their opinions of the idea, the genre and the cast of the film. This questionnaire will enable Hannah and I to further develop our idea and further establish the details of the sequence and the film. 


Wednesday 21 January 2015

Narrative Plan


Hannah and I planned the narrative of our film and determined the genre. We established the main characters in our film, target audience, cinematic style, conventions of our genre and, using Todorov's theory, we planned our narrative.

Voicenote: Discussion of Title Sequence

Hannah and I had a lengthy discussion of our title sequence in terms of cinematography, sound, mise en  scene and editing. We also discussed narrative and where it will be shot.


Narrative: Title Sequence

Title: Incursion

Hannah and I are to create an opening sequence for a mystery crime film. We have been heavily influenced by these films:
  • The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo (David Fincher, US, 2011)
  • Zodiac (David Fincher, US, 2007)
  • The Usual Suspects (Bryan Singer, US, 1995) 
  • The Sweeney (Nick Love, UK, 2012)

Genre: Mystery Crime

Conventions to Consider:
  • Unsolved crime at hand
  • Villain to catch
  • Propp character theory
  • A protagonist  trying to solve the crime
  • Transitions of fade to black
  • A crime scene
  • Eerie orchestral soundtrack
  • Dark days and light
Todorov Narrative

Equilibrium:
A woman's body is found on a train track, her face is heavily disfigured following an  acid attack. It is revealed the victim was a former police officer who was recently promoted as Sergeant of the British police force. Her previous partner on the police force, Robert Johnson, takes her place as Sargent and is also assigned an associate Sergeant Catherine Moore. Robert immediately shows a dislike for Catherine. After a shift, he is seen following a business woman  to a spa where she uses the sauna facilities. Robert replaces the water with liquid acid just before she enters and locks her in, leaving her in a chamber of vapourised acid, ultimately killing her.


Disequilibrium:
Next day, the spa is shown as a crime scene and Johnson and Moore are shown to be investigating the case. Moore finds Johnson acting dismissively towards her, raising her suspicions against him.  She later realises a piece of evidence, survellience tape,  is missing. Robert follows another woman to a hairdressers and sneaks in, unnoticed. He sneaks at the back and tampers with the woman's hairdye before swiftly leaving the shop.


Recognition of disruption:
Robert is at the flat, being informed on the recent attack as he watches it on the news and finds out about her survival. His flat reveals a detailed shrine of his victims, pictures and newspaper clippings of his work covers the wall.  Just as he's about to leave, Catherine walks in as he hides and watches her discover his wall. Although at first Catherine assumes the wall to be his investigation, she later finds his collection of surveillance tapes of the acid attacks. Catherine figures he is the murderer and rushes off the the police station leaving Robert to plan her death.


Attempt to Repair:
Seemingly calm, Robert follows Catherine in her daily activities, waiting for a moment to commit his crime. He continues to follow her  and documents her movements to which he adds it to his wall progressively. Robert then follows Catherine to an underground train station and shouts for her causing Catherine to run and call for back up.


 

New Equilibrium: 
 In an underground station, a dozen police officers, lead by Catherine, surround Robert thus making him back up towards a train track and pours the acid meant for Catherine on the floor creating a barrier between him and the police. Due to his refusal to be arrested by a woman, Robert ultimately jumps into the tracks- his death is left ambiguous.

Tuesday 20 January 2015

Audience Research: Feedback


From our research, Hannah and I established our audience liked to watch films as a way to escape from ordinary life, a range of them watch films weekly and also enjoy watching British films. This information will help Hannah and I gain a clearer idea as to what our title sequence needs to contain in order to reach out to our audience. In addition, we found out the majority of our audience enjoy crime films which tells us our genre fits the audience very well. 

This questionnaire will help Hannah and I develop our title sequence. 












Audience Research

Hannah and I conducted two questionnaires to be given to those of our target audience of 18-40 year old men. We will use this information to suit our title sequence to our audience and also gain a clearer idea of what our audience likes and dislikes. In addition we will also determine whether our genre fits our audience and it will also enable us to change anything in the development of our title sequence. 

Monday 19 January 2015

Powerpoint: Saul Bass

Powerpoint: Kyle Cooper




As part of our research into title sequences, Hannah and I researched into well known designer, Kyle Cooper. We chose Kyle Cooper as part of our research because he has worked on similar title sequences for the similar genre we have chosen.

Sunday 18 January 2015

Case Study #5: The Wire

David Simon's The Wire, season 1 title sequence 


David Simon's 2002 series The Wire, is a HBO TV crime drama series which is constructed with the use of micro features. The opening title revolves around the police and a drug dealing organisation. This adds to the narrative enigma as the audience question what the substance being dealt is and what the police are doing. The non diegetic soundtrack of a version of Way Down In The Hole by the Five Blind Boys of Alabama could reflect on the police officers personality and set the tone of the series.



The sequence begins with an extreme close up of a person making a call. The audience are left oblivious as to who this person is and whether they are an antagonist or
protagonist; their identity is kept a secret which makes the audience curious enough to continue watching. Using police iconography, the audience is able to understand what is happening throughout. The call is shown to be tracked by police, conveying to us that the person making the call is an antagonist. This is shown as the camera cuts to a close up computer screen of a wiretap activity. In addition, this close up could leave the audience wondering why the camera was so close up, we are left questioning whether there is something else on the screen that we are not meant to see.


Throughout the sequence, we do not see the actors in the series, the sequence shows the making of the drugs, police busts and court orders. Unlike a typical TV opening title, who the actors play in this series are kept a secret presumably in order to not give anything away to the audience. The camera cuts to a person talking to someone in the car. The use of a POV shot positions us in a car, which allows for the audience to fully immerse in the action on screen. It can be suggested that we are put in a position of a police officer giving us a sense of power amongst the criminals . The white typography used stands out against the background, the type used looks like chalk which could refer back to the idea of police outlining the positions of bodies with chalk.
The audience are sent back inside to an extreme close up shot of a person making a substance. Again, the use of a close up restricts the audience's view of the character's surroundings. However, it can suggested the person making the substance is highly skilled and knowledgeable as there seems to be no sense of reluctance or fear for what they are doing.


The camera then goes onto cut to a drug trade amongst two people which we assume to be teenage boys due to stereotypes revolving drugs and gangs. A POV shot could place the audience in the scene as if we are part of this drug trade. Again, the identities of these boys are hidden, allowing all of our focus to be on the drugs. The arrangement of this sequence tells the audience a story, the boy ultimately succumbs to his death leaving the drugs to fall out of his hands, to which our attention is drawn to due to the close up. This shot also stereotypically suggests to the audience that these criminals are black teenagers in some sort of gang.



The camera cuts to an extreme close up of a hand- this shot tells us the victim is a mixed race person possibly part of a drug gang. The hand is positioned in the centre of the frame drawing the audience's attention directly on the hand. However, the frame also shows some sort of drug, drawing our focus away from the hand and towards the unknown substance. This further adds to the crime genre of the series as we can tell some sort of criminal activity has been taking place in the sequence. In addition, this makes us curious as to what is going on and makes us want to watch more.



As the sequence continues, we are taken to another location. The position of the camera places us looking down upon a car- this fuels our suspicions and makes us question what is happening. The long shot puts us behind a gate, putting the audience in a position as if we are surveying the car- it can suggest the POV shot puts us in the position of a police officer. The camera cuts to a person, presumably a police officer, zooming in on his camera. The shot of the car zooms in as if the audience is the camera. The shot turns to black and white, this use editing could make us seem as if we are part of the investigation. This use of black and white also adds to the old style of the series.

The sequence progresses to yet another unknown character at a pay phone. Throughout the sequence, the audience is left oblivious to the identity of the characters in the series, the only knowledge of the characters we are informed are the names of the cast. The long shot shows us the sequence has transitioned from day to night. The use of darkness creates a sense of mystery as everything is left in the dark. A close up shot shows the audience the dirty pay phone, suggesting the series is set in a rough area of America. The audience's attention is focused on the titular wire further conveying to the us of what the show is about.    



We next see an extreme closeup of an unknown person. The close up of the wire in the person's ear further conveys the crime genre of the series. This also connotes to us that the person  is listening on the mysterious person's phone call- the police are superior at this moment to the criminal. The camera crabs to the right, showing the audience a man smoking a cigarette; which could make the audience think this police officer is calm and collected- the cigarette also adds a sense of slickness to the character as if he does not care for what the criminals are doing as he knows the police will win nonetheless. 



The Wire's title sequence shows the audience various shots of a phone wire, an extreme close up shows a blurred version of  a waveform presumably the waveform of a voice. Another extreme close up of a man, possibly a criminal, on the phone. This leads to a close up of a now visible waveform; which could suggest to the audience that the police prevail against the criminals as they successfully manage to transmit into the criminal's phone call.  The composition of uneven placements in various shots of the sequence suggests a sense of misdirection in the series as if to tell the audience that everything is not as it seems. 



However, a shot of a surveillance camera being destroyed by a civilian could make the audience and the police aware that the criminals could be one step ahead of them. In addition, this shot adds a sense of defiance against the police and using this shot puts the audience in the position of a camera- this may give us another perspective an unbiased perspective as we are not in a position of the police or a criminal but can inanimate object. 


The sequence ends with a blurred and grainy long shot of a group of people- their actions are left unknown to the audience which further fuels the mystery of the series and makes us want to watch more. 


The use of narrative in the title sequence is what I would like our title sequence to embody. As the sequence focuses heavily on the narrative not the characters in the series, this makes for a more interesting watch for the audience and makes us more anticipated to watch which is what we want for our sequence.