Editing: First Draft

Hannah and I decided to divide our roles in making the sequence- she took to the main role of filming while I took the main role of editing the sequence.

Our first sequence was under the required time limit therefore we needed to add more footage. We struggled to find appropiate music for our sequence- we initially decided for Inexorable as at the time we thought it created the right atmosphere for our sequence. Yet upon further evaluation we decided to change the music for The House of Leaves which is our final choice.

Hannah and I also wanted the wall scenes to be black and white as it adds to the mystery of the killer. In addition, this choice was to show the contrast in the wall scenes and the GoPro scenes. We added in the text fonts the audience liked- however we are yet to finalise the placement of the text as we do not want the text to take the focus away from the footage on screen.

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We were given feedback after we presented our first draft. The feedback given told us we needed to convey Hannah's character as a police officer as that was not understood in the sequence. We need to reshoot and add some more footage revolving around Hannah's character.