Saturday 31 January 2015

Pitch: Feedback


After giving our pitch to the class, Hannah and I received feedback of what went well, what needed developing and what was wrong.  From this, we have improved our pitch and added information we missed out. We changed the actor of our main lead from Jason O'Mara to Danny Dyer. Our feedback sheets questioned our budget and suggested we raise it to suit the director and genre. In our pitch, we included what we expect our title sequence to look like and added Todorov's theory to explain our narrative.

















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